Blog 3

​The Writing Center and Writing Cultures

​Upon performing my research for potential topics I might be able to discuss within this essay on the writing culture at Kean, there was an extended period of time in which I was hard-pressed to find that elusive focus. My main concern was the fact that there had been no empirical study conducted, that I could find at any rate, which sought out to examine and document said culture within the University. Therefore, there was no concrete data from which I could glean any sort of insight into this matter and felt as though I would be then forced to delve into hypothetical scenarios whose foundations would be built from unsupported assumptions and speculation. I visited the Office of Institutional Research’s website, hoping I might be able to find some sort of glaring statistic that would grab my attention and present a starting point from which to launch, but all I found were what appeared to me to be random numbers that I could not make any sense of. While being able to look up the approximate figure of Latin students who attended the University full-time, or female students who were studying to receive their bachelor’s degree are interesting examples of the information provided, it did not suit my needs very much at all.
​I was determined to find tangible evidence of an issue concerning writing culture that specifically pertained to Kean University and so decided to peruse the Office of Assessment’s website. They presented a complete list of academic majors that were offered at Kean and, for each one, made available the assessment plan for that major, which included a specified mission statement and student learning outcomes (SLO’s). The site also published the assessment report for the 2012 spring semester in which the success or shortcomings of the program level SLO’s were reviewed, documented, and where a plan of action for improvement would also be created for the following semester. Once I began reading through the various reports for different majors, their student learning outcomes and their findings once the semester was over, I was left with a plethora of data and a definite pattern, or culture concerning writing, which was pretty apparent and thus my focus had been discovered.
​I started with the department that I had devoted several years of my life to already, English, and read through their mission statement. Amongst other things, one recurring topic that seemed fairly prevalent was that of writing. In the statement, it affirms that, “…the department’s mission is to educate our diverse student community in the processes of critical reading, analytic thinking, and effective writing through the study of literature and writing.” To me, the idea of learning how to write through the act of writing itself makes total and complete sense. It connotes a connection between effective writing instruction and the implementation of a writing process, insofar as it would not be very efficient tutelage if only the final product was to be the sole criteria for grading. The mission statement also expresses its commitment to, “…develop…effective writers” through (as expressed within the SLO’s) “Thesis-driven essays.” As if the implications were not articulated clearly enough, towards the bottom of the assessment plan, the student learning outcomes are more fully developed and explained. The first of which reads, “Students will produce essays through a series of drafts that include exploratory writing or talk, as well as revisions that include addition, deletion, substitution and rearrangement.” By this point, it was obvious that effective writing instruction was a cornerstone of the English department’s mission, which probably should have gone without saying, but in order to contextualize the remainder of this essay, it was important to start off with this baseline.
​From there on, I continued reading through other various majors in order to get a sense of what their objectives were for their particular students and found there to be stark differences between them and that of the English department. While this was to be expected, I was not particularly prepared to learn of the commonalities many of them seemed to posses. It started when I was reading the documentation for the School of Management, Marketing, and International Business and the School of Accounting and Finance’s assessment process. Within it, it is stated that, “students’ graded papers revealed that writing skills fell below expectations.” in order so that I might be able to receive more insight into this statement, which was almost hidden within the paragraphs, I decided to view the assessment report for the 2012 spring semester. Under the SLO of “effective communication,” there was the following statement, “The business capstone findings showed two weaknesses related to effective ‘Focus’ and effective ‘Development of ideas and information.’” Near to this evaluation, it also explained what method was implemented to measure this particular SLO’s effectiveness, in which it read, “Case paper with rubric.” I was caught by that last word and soon found it in over abundance as I continued my exploration of different majors.
As I continued to read, it all very much started sounding the same when it came to the topic of writing within the different disciplines. In Psychology, for example, anytime an SLO required there be a written paper for assessment, it was always described exactly the same way: “Individual research review paper…scored via faculty-developed rubrics.” Every single time, for every single written assignment, this description remained the same. When I looked at the report for the past semester, the evaluation read, “Results suggest that students did not have sufficient time to generate drafts of the work prior to their being due.” The History department followed nearly the exact pattern. Assessment plan: “Research paper scored with rubric to demonstrate achievement of program.” And the report: “Analysis of written communication rubric indicated need for further instruction in writing mechanics…” This mold continued to reveal itself amongst several other departments, such as Biology, Sociology, and Political Science, to name a few. It quickly became apparent to me that, while many other programs seemed to find it necessary to have a writing component, the English department was amongst the only ones who emphasize the actual writing process as apposed to simply having a paper turned in and graded based on a rubric.

Blog 2

The student writing culture at Kean would have to be described as strained. Most Students who go to this University are also part-time, if not full-time, employees as well. That on top of the fact that most of the students who attend Kean are commuters and have to drive multiple days a week to make their classes makes the typical student's life rather hectic. When a paper is assigned, I believe that many professors do not take these factors into consideration and request a bit too much from their students. There is nothing wrong with expecting quality work, but there should be some understanding that students are constantly juggling their responsibilities and that they would truly appreciate their professors meeting them in the middle. Professors, for example, should focus more on a few assignments and giving students ample time to work on them rather than just give out multiple papers and expect that they are breezed through. There should be an emphasis on quality rather than quantity. Allow students to rethink, reorganize, and revise their papers so that by the end of the semester, they can actually be proud in what they accomplished intend of just be exhausted from turning in last minute assignments ass year.

Blog 1

I remember when I was very young I used to love how to draw. Unfortunately, this did not mean that I was any good at it at all. In fact, I was terrible at it. I quickly came to terms with this fact and so had to figure out another creative outlet that allowed me to put my imagination into a more physical form. This lead me into writing. Instead of drawing a picture, I could just describe a scene that I had dreamt up and be as creative as I wanted because I was not as limited. You could write about far more than you could draw because when drawing, you were confined to a physical space. Writing gave me more freedom and I immediately fell in love with it. I hadn't had any sort of formal writing experience before that point and so I just did whatever felt natural to do. I would write about characters from my favorite shows or books and do fan fictions based off of them. It let me immerse myself even more into the things I already loved. Since my first experiences with writing were so positive, it's made me want to have it as a permanent part of my life and even my potential career.